Sabtu, 29 November 2008

Essay

Topik:The fat people
Ts:The fat people have negative effect for their health

Main point 1 :They get weak easily
Sub 1:Too much pork in their body
Sub 2:Too much cholesterol
Main point 2 :They can not do hard works
Sub 1:They excess body weight
Sub 2:Their power or muscle is little
Main point 3 :They attack illness easily
Sub 1:Their invulnerability body is less
Sub 2:Seldom of the sport

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